In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
It is true that today crime-ralated TV shows and books are piquing more people’s interests across the world. There exists a number of compelling reasons why these novels and TV programs are attracting more individuals’ attention. I, for one, think that following them often can be a good leisure pursuit.
There are a few culprits behind this fact that account for why this specific genre is becoming widely popular. To begin with, entailing many full-fledged and well-known actors and actresses, these TV crime dramas would engage many people. In fact, many viewers opt for this type of media only because either their favorite artist has a role in it or an amazing author has written the novel. Second, in terms of both novels and moving pictures, people find them exciting to follow. In fact, by creating engaging crime stories or scenes, they deftly engage (engross) their followers (have their followers engrossed) in a way that they crave the remnants of the pages or the show.
Nevertheless, I believe they can stimulate many positives that often are disregarded. First and foremost, not only do they provide their audience with excitement, but they can foster people’s sense of imagination span. That being said, watching or reading crime stories, which are thought-provoking, will contribute to thinking deeply in order to resolve the mysteries. This genre also introduces obscure means of committing offence. In other words, it reveals the new and unknown ways of delinquencies which can act as eye-opening lessons for the public.
In conclusion, having all-around writers or artists and also producing and publishing fascinating stories and films can be named as the main reasons for the popularity of crime stories among people around the world. I, however, see them as a leisure activity that sometimes can be informative as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this TV' or ''?
Suggestion: this TV;
...ed and well-known actors and actresses, these TV crime dramas would engage many people. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19732441472 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80287113884 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0233537824 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262938354047 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794061786084 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931222824314 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158864364892 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101895030892 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.