In many countries, weddings are getting big and expensive today as they were in past.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is it a negative or positive development?
Getting married, perhaps is the most important moment in one’s life therefore people spend more and more money to make it memorable. However, there is a growing trend recently, of making matrimonial ceremonies big and costly, round the globe. I think this growing trend has negative impact on our society.
In the first place, people often consider expensive marriages as status symbol and spend huge amount of money by inviting unnecessary guests along-with buying expensive clothes and jewelry. For instance, those who want to show their community that they are very well connected socially, would consider this as an important opportunity and would invite as many political figures as they can. Hence it is quite obvious that those who are of the view that marriage ceremony are a status symbol, would invite more guests and spend more.
In addition to that, there are some people who are of the view that marriage is the most important occasion of their life and would like to have particular theme to make it memorable and would like everyone to share this moment with them, who is dear to them. In order to do that, they spend large amount of money on unnecessary things. In my own wedding, me and my wife wanted to have white color as theme and spent more money on our marriage than usual. So I am guilty of wasting handsome amount of money for no particular reason.
However, this growing trend has a huge negative implication on our society by encouraging less deprived people to spend money on their marriages beyond their financial means. Poor people are often seen, lending money for their matrimonial ceremonies and found themselves in deep trouble of financial crisis, soon after starting a new chapter of their life.
To recapitulate, keeping in view the aforementioned arguments, we can conclude that people often spend large sums on huge marriage ceremonies as status symbol, leaving a negative impact on society and leading poor people to spend more money on their marriages, leaving them in debts.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98230088496 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53660216705 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489675516224 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9523765783 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.923076923 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869665055621 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398050291535 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415723859842 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519090646544 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295072246927 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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