Some experts believe that it is better for children to start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s World, also known as global village, civilizations have merged together and growing trend of multiculturalism has urged the need to have command over various foreign languages. Some linguistics experts think that kids should start being taught a second language as early as primary school instead of secondary school. I believe that there are more pros than cons as far as this very notion is concerned.
First of all, the experts who believe that a second language should be taught to the kids at very young age, support their argument by the research, showing that young children have better ability to learn any new language as compared to the elders. For instance, if we ponder about children around us, how did they learn the language their parents and siblings spoke around them? Nobody made any effort to make them learn their mother tongue while on the contrary, when adults decide to learn a new language they really have to make a huge effort and it takes years and years to adopt the accent. Hence it can be concluded that it requires less effort to teach a secondary language to students of young ages compared to the elder ages.
Moreover, people really feel that young children have the luxury at their hand of not being worried about their grades and they can focus on learning a new language. Let’s take an example of a student of 10th who has his admission at stake. If he scores well enough, he will get enrolled in the college and course of his choice otherwise he would be forced to study a course against his will. Such students cannot afford to lose their focus from their studies to concentrate on adopting a new language.
On the other hand, where there are pros there are some cons as well of learning a different language at very young age. Young students at primary school, enrolled in a foreign language have to rely heavily on their teacher since they have limited excess and sensibility of the internet. Since, learning a new language requires lots of practice and if, this practice is done with the native speakers, that brings more fruitful results. At very young age, children cannot be allowed to be friends with strangers on the internet to practice their language skills, limiting their chances to improve.
To recapitulate, keeping all the aforementioned arguments, we can reach the logical conclusion that there are not many known disadvantages of learning a new language at young age so, advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages in the very notion.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, really, second, so, well, while, for instance, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88785046729 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54406960525 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511682242991 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8081384095 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275827903307 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910025952896 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785528659512 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156494317008 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633423678949 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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