Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

According to some of the experts, students taking up a non native language in their elementary school is advisable rather than High school.I believe that learning an overseas language during their junior school clearly has an upper hand.

Firstly, during their primary schooling the brain is in learning and developing stage.they can achieve fluency along with their mother tongue. And when they become youth they will be native speakers. For example, in countries like Japan the focus is more on soft skills and manners before knowledge.that is why they do not give any exams before grade four.

Just to add,learning an overseas language will open gates for children to do their higher studies away from their home country.For example learning the English language is relevant for students having plans for University education in countries like US, UK and Canada.

A potential disadvantage of adding a new language to their primary school curriculum is that it puts an extra burden on children.they already have enough syllabus to learn and adding another language will definitely put an extra pressure on them, but educating on extra language from an early age promotes better language skill and higher IQ in them.

To conclude and summarise, parents and teachers just need to ensure that the new language does not become a burden for the kids. it is my firm belief that time spend on it will definitely foster life skills crucial for success in future.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20416666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56928640655 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2592619901 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.125 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269502320028 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102755226837 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822975090861 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146930245615 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707353252076 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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