In some countries employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries employers are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time.
Considering the need of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In today's era there has been a debate over the ideology of paid leaves. employer is seeking to reduce costs and the employees are looking forward for a relaxation time. According to me all countries should follow the pattern of four to six weeks off annually.
For an employee, it is a must to have weekly and yearly offs. The daily routine gets monotonous for every employee, irrespective of the quality of the work environment. this this " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">can be easily comprehended by following the patterns of any organisation. For example, all offices and workplaces have a compulsory weekly off whether on a weekend like in a bank or adjusting that on a weekday (a routine being followed in the retail sector). In this context i would like to comment that, "yes" i believe that employee employee " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">should be allocated a month off in an year.
Not to forget that a paid leave is an expense for the employer but globalisation has changed the way people analyse things and situations. Most of the developed nations today are adopting modern ways and techniques to find a perfect balance between employee satisfaction and simultaneously focusing on being result oriented. For illustration a Delhi based research institute did a survey to find the happiness levels of employees around the globe. The report was not surprisingly, agreeing that employees who were given ample time of leaves showed positive growth emotionally and have been proved to be more efficient.
Keeping in mind the dilemma between the employee and the employer I feel that an individual should be given four weeks or six weeks of vacations, this will show signs of positive growth in the near future for both.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34640522876 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32321448884 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.889839701 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.846153846 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188564822306 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073785854422 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574935423226 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147632434024 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676585634282 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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