News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.
some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
what is your opinion about this?
Researchers around the world are bringing modern and a varied array of marketing strategies to cast the latest series, news or information. these perplexed thoughts are what we are going to debate upon.
marketing professionals are in a perpetual state of paranoia as to whether to be more descriptive, or to be more precise. while written data can be specific and easier to assimilate, while on the other hand pictorial image might create a better and long lasting impression in the mind of an individual, with just a glance. In this era of digitalisation and globalisation, it becomes vital for any conglomerate to focus on each mode of advertisement. At a time when radios, hoardings, flex boards and newspapers are being replaced with digital signage board, video concepts and digital/social news, visual components helps reinforce the idea and thought behind the information intended to be passed on. To exemplify, Dominos, initiated the process of sharing their pamphlets with the local dailies, with images of pizza, depicting the original idea. this idea was so successful that most of the competitors are still following the trend like sheep. I would agree to the fact that, pictures are not only a method of sharing data, but also plays an important role in content writing, by bringing out humor as a manner of cutting through the mundane write-ups.
A study, has revealed that world leaders and businessmen are avid information gatherers and often spend majority of the time, reading and gaining knowledge. these users are generally not looking for an image or a picture, but only for meaningful and trustworthy content to help assess their personal growth and increase awareness. For illustration, Economic times is a newspaper that is published worldwide, read by leaders and enthusiasts, and yet, has no images or colour schemes.
Considering that the world is growing at an incomparable pace, it would not be incorrect to conclude that, having a world-class marketing and graphic designing team, empowered with relevant data and information can bring out the positive outcome by adding informative or correlated pictures and visual representations, wherever necessary or possible, since even fiction movies like Harry Potter have shown the concept of digitalised newspapers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, thus, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34246575342 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03120197292 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627397260274 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7646674211 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079786332705 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02991035752 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021211827348 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475236570798 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220275012055 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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