In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring.
To what extent do you agree or diagree?
The women do not feel necessary to get married these days. Some people opine that this is due to the fact that women are earning, and they do not want to be dependent on others for their financial needs. I agree to the given statement because the females are not interested in marriage as they assume that they are capable to look upon their expenses and consider that marriage is a choice not an obligation.
The first point to consider that woman loose interest in marriages is that she contemplates that she can earn and pay for her expenses and becomes self reliant. In many nations, women are not getting married because they find fulfillment of life by participating in other activities such as community work, run their business and completing their studies. Woman wants to devote time to herslef and do not want to be in any commitment. For example, famous Indian Actress, Sushmita Sen, she is a single mother and is not knotted in marriage.
Furthermore, females assert that marriage is not an obligation, it is a choice. If someone is not ready to be in relationship which requires commitment, they cannot be forced to get married. The woman is educated and disregarding all the taboos the society has about marriages. For example, in India, in early years, when a girl completed her education, parents arranged her marriage but nowadays, age, employment status is not parameter for one to get married.
To sum up what have discussed so far, women empowerment and self dependency has set up mark in society that it is not essential for a female to get married unless she is willing for that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65949820789 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58266547759 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534050179211 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 279.0 20.2975951904 1375% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1300.0 106.682146367 1219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 279.0 20.7667163134 1343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 7.06120827912 1147% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262835930013 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262835930013 0.084324248473 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1622254276 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975197203277 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.0 13.0946893788 1069% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -203.25 50.2224549098 -405% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.9 11.3001002004 981% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.7 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 113.6 10.1190380762 1123% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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