In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring.
To what extent do you agree?
Owing to the independent culture these days, females prefer to stay single for their entire life. A better part of society thinks that this is because they are self dependent, and hence, monetary safety through marriage is no longer considered by them. I agree with the above notion, but only to a certain extent. Though self-reliance on earning plays a prominent role in taking this decision, work and family aspects should also be looked after.
One of the main reasons that money is considered as a vital factor while deciding to not get hitched by women is that in yesteryears, due to conservative culture, females were not allowed to study or work. So they had no say while choosing a life partner and had to compromise. Also, they had to depend on their husband for their basic monetary needs. Another reason that can be mentioned here is that being able to earn gives a boost to their self-worth, which in turn, helps them to gain confidence. And it is this confidence that helps them to make life changing decisions in a better way. Furthermore, this self-worth helps them to create an impact in their social life, because of which they are thought as an esteemed figure and people aspire to be like them.
Having said that, apart from money, there are some other factors too that women keep in mind before taking this decision. One of them is work. Females these days are well educated and even they dream to become successful in their working field. It is of utmost importance to them and hence, it comes first. In some cases, these ladies worked so hard their entire life to achieve a desired goal, that there is nothing as important to them as their work. Another factor that needs a limelight is family. No matter what, women are not ready to get separated from their closed ones. While one reason for this can be that they are forced to stay with their family members due to a mishappening, another reason for this could be the love and affection they get from their own family, which they think they may not get from the in-laws.
To conclude, though, no one can deny the fact that self-dependence has led female fraternity to stay single, important factors like their job and their family too have contributed in this change and hence, are responsible for the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, well, while, apart from, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70719602978 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39988475321 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521091811414 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1547082387 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8421052632 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179580075816 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573958566504 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408583575263 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114309739538 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251689828839 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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