In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent them?
With the rapid growth of industrialization and construction industry in developing countries, quality of air and water has witnessed a significant reduction. In my opinion, using modern technologies and enforcing strict pollution control laws is important to improve the current situation.
One of the major causes of water pollution is the sewage waste and water being dumped into regular water resources. Harmful bacteria and virus infects the whole water body and eventually becomes the reason for human health disorders. To curb this menace of pollution, modern technologies could be used for the treatment of sewage water in order to make it appropriate for domestic use. In fact, in developed countries like the U.S.A., the advanced water treatment plants make the polluted water even fit for normal use in household activities. Furthermore, the government should also make strict laws instructing the industrialists to treat the wastewater before streaming it into open water bodies.
The other major consequence of Industrialization is the air pollution. One of the main reasons for polluted air is the emission of harmful gases from industries while manufacturing goods. Compounding with this, the huge amount of debris from construction sites, makes the situation more gruesome. Pollution control boards should make sure that the companies obtain the environment clearance certificate regularly and operate within an admissible level of air pollution. Also, hefty penalties could be imposed on the rule violators to deter them from violating policies. Moreover, construction managers should obtain an approval letter from the environment department before commencing their projects. These steps will ensure that construction sites and industries do not generate harmful pollutants and take preventive measures for the reduction of air pollution.
In conclusion, the growth of industrialization is essential for a developing economy and to reduce its impact on the deterioration of air and water, advanced technologies and stringent action plans and policies should be enforced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16308157643 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5038810722 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259475532937 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901996416266 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700297322966 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160738236646 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321123915891 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.