Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced?
Somehow, the internet and technology make a negative impact on teenagers and youth. many physicians considered to be worry related to the large use of the internet and computer games by children. playing constantly video games causes physical and mental issues such as depression, anxiety, blood pressure, high heartbeat, study performance, and other more. In this essay, I will discuss the problems for this menace, and also suggest some viable solution to curb this problem.
Nowadays, there are enormous games available on the internet which plays on a different type of resolution gadgets. As per the survey, Mostly players are the age of children and young. Because of more hours spend on computer games, players become addicted to these types of games and increase their stress level. Consequently, they having mental and physical health difficulties. As an illustration, PubG, which is one type of violent game. People spending more time sitting in one place for playing. As per the report released by the who, children who are playing this game are the victim of behavior issues and study performance. Even more, studies show that excessive use of addictive application creates laziness and heartbeat problems.
To quit playing a game, there are several ways to follow. Firstly, children can take limit their time to spend on games. So, they should spend more time studying. Secondly, they should do some other leisure activities such as outdoor games and watch movies. Thirdly, they can talk or gossip with family or friends in their spare time. they should do some exercise or meditation to get relaxation. it is quite true that exercise can reduce depression.
To conclude this, spending too much time playing games is affected in many ways like mentally as well as physically. But, with the limited use of these games, we can reduce the extra use of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10749185668 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5699107818 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2655947483 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.619047619 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262772978693 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691349093455 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595890198077 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165841854128 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665694567911 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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