Many people nowadays work long hours and working has become more stressful.
What are the reasons for this?
What could companies do to help employees to improve their lives?
people in all around the world are concerned to earn more success and development in their individual life. Also, many companies are forced to overtime to their employee to growth of own. Thus, it becomes a hectic and stressful work-schedule for persons. There are several causes for such a trend. Firms take some measure to improve workers` lives. Both the reasons and solutions are explained and justified in ensuing paragraphs.
The main reason associated with this trend is competition. With the globalization, more businesses are becoming international. Therefore, Most of companies compete with others to reach at hight of success in the world. To complete the target in short span of time, employer have to make pressure on their employee to finish project within deadline. In addition, people have many reasons to work for long hours such as financial issues, family background and many more. As a result, they have not much time to spend with their family or friends or to enjoy themselves. so, The life is filled with stress and anxiety.
Organisations can take many steps to make better life to their staff. they should offer monthly paid leaves so that people can get some relaxation time from work. Moreover, they can improve their working environment with organize some recreational activities which motivate them to work . From this, employees feel productive and energetic. Even more, they can arrange annual trips or tours. so, persons can received time to make memory for individuals. companies should make sure all requirements of their staff.
To conclude, it can be stated that In this fast-moving era, people get busy schedule which is filled with stress. However, corporations can manage and help them to get out from rigid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17894736842 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73922430572 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1942836487 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0909090909 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9545454545 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311936143435 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846323161816 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672405159231 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184149843262 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685966701349 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.