Many animal species in the world are become extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human being. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
In today`s world, the extinction of animals is faster than in the past time. many people argue that it is the nation's and human`s responsibility to take care of these animals. however, others considered to be a focus on issues of human life. In this essay, I will discuss both views with relevant examples to illustrate my views.
The main cause of the extinction of animal species is global warming. With the effect of climate change, wild animals face the problem for survive their life. Intense heat, storm, heavy rain, warming ocean can directly affect the animals. Even more, As per scientific research, ocean animals such as sharks have abolished because of the rising level of the sea. So, I think that every life has an equal right to live in the world and as a human being, we have a responsibility to protect other animal`s life. Thus, the government should take some steps to protect animals. they should build some wildlife supported organization that provides basic needs to an animal such as food and protect them with an animal doctor.
On the flip side, many people badly behave towards animals because they think that human life is more important than other creature`s life. Generally, they are having fear about wild animals because of their fears they want to kill or harm them. Also, they think that because of these animals, the human cannot receive some nature`s advantages like animals eat the food of farm which manufactured by a farmer. Hence, people think to abolish those lives. but, I think that the Agriculture Department should find some other way to protect a farmer`s land, but protect those innocent lives.
To conclude, In my opinion, every life has equal rights as a human in the world. that`s why the government should need to spread awareness about this and take some developmental steps in this field. As a result, people get aware of the animal's rights as them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96012269939 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62910637073 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2671639516 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1052631579 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298254388836 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938110881339 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417687255872 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185056571168 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445918414702 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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