Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?
In the contemporary world, a significant rise in lack of physical workout has been noticed by the health experts. There are a plethora of reasons such as advancement in technology, Internet, stressful life style and no work-social life balance. However, every problem has a solution. In this essay, we will discuss the problems related in the details and viable solutions will be provided.
To begin with, the number one problem associated with it is the advent of new technology. Due to which everyday new gadgets are coming in the market. As a result, more and more people are buying smart phones and laptops. Which keep them busy all the time either with friends indulging in chat conversations or browsing on various applications like Facebook, Instagram and Twitter. Ultimately, which put a bad impact on the health and distracting people from being indulging in the physical activities. Next to it, a majority of people are living a stressful life. Besides that, they are struggling to earn their livinghoods and maximum amount of their time has been spent at work. Eventually, their health suffers. According to the recent survey by WHO, which stated that the major cause of mortality in human being is being immobile for prolong period of time and this ratio has rise to 79% within the last decade.
The very first and effective solution of this problem is the government should allocate more money to the local communities to held competitions. This means the competition will be related to a race, swimming, tennis and various other activities which involve the physical body. This subtly keep the community involve in outdoor activities and bring them health benefits. Secondly, strict law should be purposed by authorities towards the limit of working hours per day. Which will definately give extra time to every individual to spend on doing workout.
In the conclusion, there are various problems occuring because the lack of traditional yoga and exercise. However, these issues can be resolved with addapting good habits like running, cycling, yoga and aerobics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15634218289 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71456320358 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587020648968 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3911157496 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147878814496 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039609790985 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349046322364 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844473689124 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388399054231 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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