Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Some museums impose an admission charge whilst some museums are free. In this brief essay, the argument will be presented on both the advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the drawback of an entrance fee obscured its benefits where the income will be put towards the operation cost of the museum.
A major disadvantage of an admission fee is the possibility of reducing visitors. Museums house valuable exhibitions and historical artefacts of great education value. Failing to attract entrants diminishes one of the aims of a museum to educate the community. History of mankind is necessary to pass on younger generation and not be forgotten. Take for an example, London museum houses monuments from Egypt (such as, clothes, books, vases with drawings and more) dated back a thousand-year. This section of the museum is free of charge, providing the opportunities for children to understand the past and learn from mistake in the past to prevent similar event to occur.
An entrance fee might have a negative social image impact and negative effect on admission figure, but an income could mostly be in favour to the museum in reducing operation cost. The television channel, National Geographic, has once aired a TV series of maintaining historical artefacts. It showed changes to the environment has increased the challenge to keep artefacts from the past. Associated to cost to maintain the items have seen drastically increased over the years. There are increasing debates to ensure articles of historical values should be conserved with all power and resources. This example speaks of volume the reasonable cause of charging admission fee.
In conclusion, the drawback of an admission fee is overshadowed by the advantage. Museum around the world can follow the successful implementation of admission fee model from London Museum, where majority of the museum is free of charge and occasional rare exhibitions requires an admission fee to continue viewing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29936305732 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9364922499 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4431132057 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278381248204 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843828938648 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876083989124 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18395379112 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587722640337 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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