Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than they did in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.
Advancement in technology and dedication of scientist has made possible invention of medication and equipment to cure deadly disease known in the past, prolonging lives of human-being. There are positive and negative effects to this and will be detailed in this short essay.
Notwithstanding elder generation lives longer, it is noticeable, mid-age group has a tendency of giving birth at a later age. Elder generation possesses valuable experiences, passing their life-long knowledge to their grandchildren benefits society, imperilling mistake reoccurring, where business growth stronger. Further, people has the capability to work for a longer period of life, supporting the growth of economy. For example, Mr. Lee Ka Sing of Hong Kong Sun Hung Kei group continue to be the Chief Executive of the company till 89 years of age, leading with vision, the company survived through number of financial crisis and sustained the economy of Hong Kong
Conversely, the drawback of elderly with long-term illness and without contribution to the society, could in fact, be a burden. Modern medication is masking an increasing amount of illness over a longer lifespan. Moral is a key factor. In my own experience, my grandmother is at age of 92, has suffered over 10 years of heart and aspiratory sickness. Pollution has cause her difficult to breathing, however, machinery and medication were able to soothe her illness. Common to most healthcare system around the globe, shortage of staff in hospital has an impact in providing high quality medical care to patient at all age. The mental health of doctors and nurses has long been a source of controversy, impacting patient and families’ confidence to these professions.
In no doubt, modern medical science benefits significantly in curing deadly disease normally seen in child and increasing the life expectancy of people. Necessary solution would be required to resolve the imbalance of medical staff and number of patient and eliminate the risk of reduced confidence in medical care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, so, for example, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3769470405 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99185463966 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.876930644 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162253965082 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052236907939 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507849132098 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105439116054 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720834590836 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.