Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.
Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Give reasons for your answer.
In nowadays posting stories about famous person and their family become very popular. Many magazines and newspaper publish articles about celebrities and their private lives. They tell their readers what famous people ate where they traveled, and who was with them. Sometimes they even write very intimate detail, such as who sleep with whom, or about sexual orientation. Often they print photos of celebrity in the intimate situation on the gate or first page. Needless to say, these piquant stories and pictures raise the sales of magazines and newspapers.
The question is whether it is appropriate to publish this kind of private stories in respectable and known publications?
Most of people believe, newspapers should publish news and additional useful information. Of course they may to publish some interesting stories too, but these articles must be truth. They should check all information before the publishing and to have proof of all details was mentioned in the article.
In contrast to newspaper, the magazines can publish any stories they desire. Even if it fiction story. Most of people reads magazines for fun only and understands that half of stories are fake. They enjoy reading articles such as they enjoy reading interesting books or watching films.
On my opinion, the both newspapers and magazines shouldn’t publish intimate details of famous persons’ lives. It can damage to mentioned people, their family and friends. Also it can spoil popularity of publicists and become them to be “yellow pages”. Especially to respectable newspapers, if discovers they wrote false information, people will not trust them anymore. That behavior may have additional negative consequences.
Any case, always think twice before writing something about someone
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays posting stories about famous person and...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...n respectable and known publications? Most of people believe, newspapers should publish news...
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Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es can publish any stories they desire. Even if it fiction story. Most of people reads ...
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Line 6, column 104, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... they desire. Even if it fiction story. Most of people reads magazines for fun only and unders...
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Line 8, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ioned people, their family and friends. Also it can spoil popularity of publicists a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in contrast, kind of, of course, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53260869565 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79658279715 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8479211308 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.35 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34011062856 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945417120274 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688882792039 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149271174048 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10710677016 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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