Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.
Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Media these days publish personal lives of renowned personalities. Some say it is fair on their part to give such news, however, I argue that too much of exposure of their private life is not necessary.
On the one hand, as these eminent people have a huge fan following, it becomes imperative on the part of followers to know about their well-being. Moreover the general public is very keen to know about the lifestyle of their role models. In this situation, they resort to newspapers and magazines so as to have an insight into the life of a superstar. However, media takes advantage of this eagerness of people and publish more than what is required.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that these famous people also need space. For instance, wedding is a private affair. Covering their marriage ceremony or for that matter a detailed view of their home, fitness center, holiday destination will only but a hindrance in their lives. Subsequently, these people will always be conscious in their efforts and portray a good image of themselves.
Following, over advertising can also have a negative effect on the economic status of middle class people. They tend to spend more than their purchasing power as a means to look alike their famous icon. Albeit, in order to have a lifestyle modification, they may spend more on designer clothes, visiting expensive hotels or holidaying abroad to name a few.
To recapitulate, newspapers and magazines should shift their focus on more important matters which require attention. However, publicity upto a certain limit is fine as excess of everything is bad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...llowers to know about their well-being. Moreover the general public is very keen to know...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ow about their well-being. Moreover the general public is very keen to know about the lifestyl...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...they resort to newspapers and magazines so as to have an insight into the life of a supe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9741697417 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72682991165 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9183681009 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207931455335 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642256291196 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039667750473 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102523270532 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272404202441 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.