Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
A plethora of criminals who spent sometimes in a jail as a kind of punishment for the first time, might commit more crimes afterward. This due to several factors such as mix all prisoners together and sharing some risky stories. This essay aims to explore in further detail the reasons of such an issue and offers some solutions to overcome it before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that blending prisoners all together might exacerbate their attitudes and lead them to become more aggressive in the future. For instance, offenders who had small crimes such as thefts, or dangerous driving can easily being influenced by other dangerous prisoners who have been accused of murdering or drug trading. Since it gives them the opportunities to hear and learn new bad experience that has made by other prisoners. Brazil has a live example of very bad prison environment. Since every single jail has some dangerous gangs who have been accused of drug trading and smuggling or even murdering. They create no valuable area for offenders who have been charged for smaller crimes to obtain.
In contrast, there are some solutions might help in alleviate such a problem. First of all, split prisoners into several sections based on their crime, to avoid sharing some negative experience with other dangerous prisoners. Saudi Arabia for example has allocated a special place to prisoners who involved in some small crimes. This place called Eslahia and it aims to keep regular prisoners who might be released after a short period away from bad people, who might be terrorists or redical individuals, in terms of protecting them to being leverged by their detrimental vision. Second of all, enhancing the prisoners thoughts and skills by providing some theoretical and vocational sessions and prepared them to become a productive member of the global society. Denmark is playing as a role model in dealing with prisoners, as every jail has it own library and computer laps, study area and more other beneficial facilities. This move in fact lures peisoners to utilize their times wisely and study. Eventually, this great action might enhance offenders attitude and convert them to a poactive members. Finally, there is no doubt that the type of punishment is playing a fundamental role in mitigating crime level after prisoners released. Therefore, many advance nations nowadays impose various valuable penalties on guilty individuals such as working as volunteer in elderly house or helping disable people. such this action has remarkable results on convicts' mentalities as it makes them to be more helpful and proactive in their communities.
To sum up, integrating all prisoners together is the main cause of many criminals to do more crimes. However, following the offered solutions might help offenders to become more productive for their societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2419.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21336206897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70911173225 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530172413793 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0441176268 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.954545455 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.40909090909 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178174887919 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052586662491 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396917238135 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113949528453 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379849000007 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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