Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
A large number of criminals commit many offences after release from the punishment of first crime. This is because of the lack of rehabilitation within the jail and the lack of employment opportunities after release. This essay will illustrate solutions to deal with these kinds of issues.
Firstly, criminals often do not undergo through proper rehabilitation within the jails and they are released only by serving their term. In other words, jail authorities do not make them realise how bad it is to commit a crime. Therefore, lack of self-realisation, re-motivate them towards crime. Secondly, the lack of career opportunities is another reason why they re-offend. Moreover, after all, they are human beings and they have a family to take care of, thus, in order to fulfil the basic necessities of life without any source of income, they choose unethical approaches. To illustrate, FBI reports stated that more than 60% of delinquents re-offended crimes within a year after serving the jail term, due to financial crisis.
There are two effective solutions to inculcate the quality of self-introspection among offenders. Primarily, there should be either proper skills training for criminals within the jails or some personal development training to change the minds of lawbreakers. By doing this, we can alleviate the problem effectively. Another method of dealing with these menaces is to maintain proper check of their activities after release. Also, we can closely watch them and take the immediate step if they try to choose the wrong way again. For instance, the government of Sweden recently took different rehabilitation measures and implemented a need-based strategy to train human resources within jails. As a result, crime rates are reducing 10% annually within the country.
To conclude, although acquiring a normal life is a big hurdle for the person released from jail owing to fewer job opportunities, this issue can be resolved by providing skill-based training and proper monitoring of activities of the offenders. Henceforth, crime rates will significantly reduce after the proper implementation of these measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of criminals commit many offences after re...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...e care of, thus, in order to fulfil the basic necessities of life without any source of income, t...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: changing
...s or some personal development training to change the minds of lawbreakers. By doing this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, after all, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42388059701 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06258182591 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7570191212 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23030998536 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692116420587 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537948068969 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141484433883 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406797492212 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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