These days smoking in work place has been banned by many offices. While some governments have gone to an extend of imposing a curfew on smoking in all public ares. Even though many view this as a positive initiative, another school of thought opine that it curtails freedom. This essay shall analyze my opinion that banning smoking is advantageous.
To begin with, smoking, whether done in excess or moderation, is harmful to health. Although, this is common knowledge and the ill effects of smoking have been heavily advertised many do not pay heed and instead turn a blind eye to it. Therefore, keeping the health of it's citizens in mind, the government needs to intervene. Secondly, continuous smoking can have serious repercussions and can even lead to life threatening diseases namely, cancer. Imposing a complete halt and heavy penalty will compel some, if not all,to discontinue smoking, thus encouraging healthy living.
Similarly, an office contains plethora of people, some of which do not smoke and detest the smell of cigarettes. They find it off putting and too strong and causes inconvenience. Some colleagues even experience headaches, consequently hampering their productivity at work. Furthermore, if the cigarette is not properly disposed off, it may be hazardous and compromise people safely. For example, there have been many instances of cigarettes being the root cause of fire at work place. In order to avoid any discomfort to the staff, banning smoking on office premises is absolutely imperative.
To recapitulate, undertaking an activity at the expense of causing discomfort to others, by no means is freedom. Imposing a ban on smoking is essential for the well being of the people and also to maintain a safe and inclusive environment where everyone can work and thrive in harmony.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... place has been banned by many offices. While some governments have gone to an extend...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...es. While some governments have gone to an extend of imposing a curfew on smoking in all ...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun view seems to be countable; consider using: 'many views'.
Suggestion: many views
...smoking in all public ares. Even though many view this as a positive initiative, another ...
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Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...avy penalty will compel some, if not all,to discontinue smoking, thus encouraging h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.204778157 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89293391161 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645051194539 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3894127501 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7058823529 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342004129576 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941276578038 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731028559171 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19593884857 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923262152763 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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