Several historical constructions are preserving thanks to the law and related rules, while a number of individuals are of the opinion that these old and ancient buildings should be knocked down and reconstruct by new ones. This essay will argue some crucial rationales related to the heritage and historical structures maintenance and how it can be in the advantage of the history's progress, which is vital.
No doubt, one of the effective ways to revive the history of an area is by preservation and care about the historical constructions regarding that region. If we devastate or reconstruct an ancient monument, there will be no other way to compensate for its initial value and massage that announced by our ancestors. What is noticeable is how the primary architectures built such marvelous and unique buildings and structures lack of any modern equipment. These constructions must be maintained in the frame of museums since they can convey in-depth information about our cultural and traditional values that are undeniably instructive for the next generation.
Furthermore, it would not be an end here. History is the identity of the various cultures and illustrates humans all ups and downs and complications have been passed to deliver this treasure values to us. If we live in tranquility and convenience today, this is because of all sacrifices and endeavors that our original people did. It will be meaningful and worth to conserve the original histories related to the beginning of human civilization, and consciously convey that to the prospect generations. The more humans comprehend history, the more they can apply their constructive lessons in diverse aspects of this contemporary life.
In conclusion, although some people evoke historical building preservation by authority and government can be a waste of budget to some extent, and new construction and skyscrapers can be an appropriate replacement for them. I believe the care and maintenance of these historical constructions are necessary regarding their significant role in any nation's identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 348, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...regarding their significant role in any nations identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37423312883 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18746344587 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0420440737 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238609859355 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739950396677 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536911736553 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143143777373 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613430703138 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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