Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time and they should read only read serious educational books. what is your opinion about this?
Reading books like novels, magazines by children are consider non-productive by some parents and they prefer kids should focus on their study books only. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this notion and kids ought to be allowed to read any books out of their subjects as it will be greatly beneficial for them.
A good reason to read these books is that it helps to refresh their mind. Children’s spent 7-8 hours in school and stick with their study book, its slow down their brain functionality which makes them feel tired and they unable to focus on their other chores. Therefore, reading books that give kids amusement helps to bring back their enthusiasm. Thus, A healthy and refresh mind can better focus on things and children can do better in their study.
Another point to consider is that reading books out of syllabus, broaden the imagination of kids. It helps them to be creative and they can pursue their career in this industry. Presently, the entertainment industry is spreading throughout the world and millions of people relate to it in different ways. Films and television shows are being produced based on novels.
In conclusion, reading enjoyable books have no bad effect on kids, but it helps to get rid of stress and it could be a career-making for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
... like novels, magazines by children are consider non-productive by some parents and they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88687782805 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62611118223 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9476930725 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340554058666 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132083355277 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826493700301 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205492213354 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849860453425 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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