Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
To what extent do you agree?
It is commonly believed that coverage given to celebrities by media have detrimental effects on children. In my
opinion, it is the role of media to cover any popular person but the time for it should be limited as children
need to learn many other things.
Children get inspired by celebrities and are curious to know about their personality to imitate them. When they
see the fame or wealth of celebrities because of media, it gives them inspiration to achieve something in life.
This motivation, channelised properly and used in right direction,can transform their life tremendously.
Also, some celebrities take part in many social welfare activities which again children get to know through
media. Therefore they also develop a passion of giving back to soceity.
But there are some serious consequences of it too. Firstly, celebrities working in a movie and having a superhero
role gets popular among children, creating unrealistic characterisitics of human in their mind. Secondly, there
are many other profession in the soceity which needs development therefore children need to have motivation to
pursue that career. For that it requires the coverage of professional people such as scientists, teachers, doctors.
For that glamourous life of celebrities shown on TV have to be curtailed.
To conclude, celebrities should be given time on media but the limit of time for it needs to be monitored
strictly in order to have a postive effect on children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29661016949 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99991621065 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0688249761 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279774862271 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101894669675 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963097730075 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981452700419 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814955670909 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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