Many people believe that the media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. TO WHAT EXTENT do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is often argued that publishing news related to public figures could affect youngsters adversely. While I accept the idea that children may follow the steps of some figures and harm their society, I agree that not all celebrities are of dire influence on children’s personalities.
On the one hand, children have vulnerable psychology; in other words, they can easily get affected by negative influencers. If a child is growing up watching scandals of careless public figures, he or she will more likely to grow ill-behaved. That is the case nowadays in Egypt where some areas are suffering from the omnipresence of white weapons among 8-12-year-olds who are following celebrities with bad reputation on Instagram, Facebook, and other social media applications. Therefore, it might be justified why some people might think that disclosing celebrities daily actions could be harmful.
On the other hand, I would side with those who believe that the majority of celebrities can set a role model for our children. As publicizing news related to public figure’s donations to help less fortunate people or interviewing them while talking about their achievements would have significant positive impacts on children personalities. For instance, Amro Diab, an Egyptian singer, is considered to be an idol for youth due to his massive international success in the field of music as well as business, and his recent campaign to improve the quality of life of impoverished people has gained an enormous popularity among youths causing them to donate to local charities.
To conclude, despite the possible negative impacts on children’s behavior, I reiterate that revealing information about some celebrities is of utmost importance for motivating children to follow their positive deeds in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, talking about, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45195729537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1498381267 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2368584372 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.2 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168399646355 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651589098968 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439815542927 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997562266088 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101465932675 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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