Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Technology has encouraged researchers and scientists to perceive new things. It is often argued by many people that scientific researches ought to be done and managed by governments in lieu of private entities. I disagree with this perspective because any individual can invent anything and it is a hard fact that private organisations tend to be more dedicated due to their goals.
The core intention of a research is to identify a particular thing, which can be achieved by anyone who has the required knowledge about it. Results can not be necessarily achieved only by governments from a research. A knowledgeable individual working in a private sector can also achieve something which the government has been looking for. Older people cannot work in government departments after a certain age and, many have preference to work in private sectors. Consequently, many new things would not be delivered to the world because of discouraging private research companies. To illustrate, Albert Einstein never worked for the government and invented electricity with the help of many researches done by him.
It is to much extent true that private companies tend to be more productive in comparison with government departments. Government jobs are considered as secured jobs due to which the employees do not give much importance to their work. Therefore, many researches may not get the desired outcome or take longer time than expected. However, Each business firm is established with an agenda and works throughout years to achieve the organisational objective. Besides, employees always have the pressure of termination if they won’t perform well. As a result, they do researches effectively that may result in achieving the required output. For example, Mapsco, a private research institute in Russia, produced the first coronavirus vaccine which has helped the country fight with the virus.
To conclude, it is understandable that the government manages its country and is a source of every solution. However, prohibiting private companies to perform researches would hurt and discourage many individuals. Also, the world may not able to see many inventions or may not get on time.
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Suggestion: research
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: "required output" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'output' or 'to be output'.
Suggestion: output; to be output
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34104046243 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06458703173 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4253565061 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2631578947 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292108536239 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916355358638 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605609576714 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184853954698 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437100796671 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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