In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
It is irrefutable that aged population is rising in many nations dramatically. Governments are concerned about such a community because there may be several problems associated to it that needs to be taken control of. I intend to delve into the positives and negatives of increasing aged population on the society.
More number of older people means many experienced people in different fields. Aged people have experience of different things such as professional life and personal life. Youngsters who are to gradudate from colleges could learn from such a generation that has knowledge about a particular field. Not only does the professional life of old people would be a lesson to them, but it may inspire them too. Consequently, adults would use that knowledge in their life that would help them in achieving their goals. For example, Bill Gates is an inspiration to the young generation and they watch his journey from his teenage sacrifices to building a successful company ‘ The Microsoft’.
Nowadays, companies prefer not to hire old individuals because of less efficiency due to their age, therefore, older generation struggle to find a job for living. Young professionals are able to work in a fast-paced environment and finish a task more quickly in comparison with aged employees. Thus, less opportunities are given to the older people that make the living very troublesome for them. As a result, aged people are unable to live a decent life and the poverty rate increases in the country. To illustrate, Bangladesh has the maximum poverty rate around the world because the nation mostly operates manufacturing firms which embrace complex tasks that can be done by young people only.
In conclusion, the increasing proportion of older people is problematic issue for many countries. Though, it has some benefits to the societies, but has more severe problems such as rising poverty rate that is not just a concern to societies however to the entire nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15527950311 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9157505069 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1085370672 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199940638278 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710732490359 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747616012186 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125023706311 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475408473924 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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