Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
One question that has caused a great concern over a decade is unsociable conduct along with degrading others. There are many reasons for this burning issue, however, if the government and society takes appropriate measures then this issue can be overcome.
Bad behaviour and disrespecting others can be caused by multifarious reasons. One of the major reason behind this problem is illiteracy. This illiterateness hampers the up-bringing of children which in turn results low self esteem and they indulge in bad habits. A perfect example to this cause is drug addicts, many teenagers grow up in bad atmosphere are ignorant about basic society culture and ethics and become antisocial. To add up the aforementioned cause, there is also social stress or peer pressure like inequality of income and unemployment.
Fortunately, there are ways by which this burning issue can be tackled. Firstly, “Education leads to edification”, measures to be taken by government to provide free basic education to children who belong to families who are categorised as below poverty line. Recently one of the fast developing country has started a policy called “educate the girl and save the girl” albeit it is good policy but it shouldn’t be gender biased. Further to this, government should also impose strict ban on drugs and alcohol. To support the statement, recently a state in India is declared as dry state that is alcohol free state. Along with the government, the society also has an equal role to play and overcome this situation, to begin living in joint family rather than following nuclear culture. Also, teaching children about the religion and cultural values.
To sum, although the serious causes leading to antisocial conduct and disrespecting others, consistent and collective measures by the government and society can solve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...but it shouldn't be gender biased. Further to this, government should also impose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34353741497 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99549424853 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2486463886 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805929732489 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280707387789 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254046337956 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579649524427 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325567335125 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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