Some people think public library services are no long necessary but other think public libraries are useful services. Give your opinion
People have conflicting view that public libraries have become redundant as these days almost every piece of information is available online. While, I certainly agree to former view, as libraries are noiseless and not all age group is aware or comfortable using technology.
Reading rooms provides much more than just access to all genres of books under one roof. Undoubtedly, libraries are the most silent place where people focus on deep studies and research. Distractions and hustle bustle of everyday life destroy the pleasure of reading. To show, one of my friend has enrolled in the renowned library named “David Sassoon Library” for entire year as he is studying for PhD in physics and needs utmost concentration. Besides, for some people reading is a recreational activity which I strongly believe to be performed in environment where everyone is reading.
Furthermore, people from all age group are not tech savvy and so they opt for libraries. Not everybody is comfortable using technology like people who are aged and find it difficult to accustom themselves with ever-changing technology. Although, it is much easier to get access to information or study through internet, however, it is harmful for eyes as they get strained out by looking continuously towards screen. People might face some serious eye problems in long run. For instance, majority of young adults tend to complain about vision problems in early age as they spend an ample amount of time on smartphones and tablets.
In conclusion, the essay strongly supports the services provided by libraries and I believe this age-old culture is worth protecting in long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... named 'David Sassoon Library' for entire year as he is studying for Ph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25563909774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88047458103 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654135338346 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0235856462 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179303882115 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602681298161 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487628716612 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110823043394 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343836010774 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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