Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on child's development. Others think that other influences like friends, teachers and means of media have much bigger effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on child's development. Others think that other influences like friends, teachers and means of media have much bigger effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that character of any person comes from roots i.e. parents and grandparents whilst other thinks that outside world over powers ones root. It is necessary to look at both arguments before forming an opinion.
First and foremost, parents have direct interactions with their children which develops their personality. Children develop their habits seeing their parents or elders in home so it somehow directly affects the upbringing. Most of the children take qualities and traits from parents. Parents know their child’s nature better than anyone else. It is very important that parents inculcate upright societal behavior and make their child a responsible citizen. That is why it is strongly opined that parents play strongest role in nurturing of child.
Secondly, children find out who they are by comparing themselves with others. Children should be taught how to build relationship and good mannerism in treating others. Most importantly, child should learn to develop and support good friendships which helps to develop healthy psyche and have better self-esteem. Apart from social circle, teachers also coach discipline right from elementary school. Nowadays, schools encourages students to take part to competitions which helps develops communication skills, superior listening, group discussions, building confidence etc.
Lastly, social media can be maker or breaker of one’s character. Media plays and vital source of information in both formal and informal education while on the other hand, media addiction can negatively impact leading to depressions, poor sleep quality etc.
In my opinion, it is difficult to generalize which factors impact the most on child’s personality amongst parents, peers or social media. Each element has their role to play and it is subjective about how the respondent takes it. For example, if the parents work extra jobs and are largely unavailable, their children may turn to their peer group for emotional support.
To put in nutshell, I would pen down saying that, in early years, parents play an important role however, in teenage and later years along with parents, peers and media too play important role.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'play the strongest'.
Suggestion: play the strongest
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Message: Did you mean 'to play'?
Suggestion: to play
...ars along with parents, peers and media too play important role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53475935829 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6902966835 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0796175705 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294902552459 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965914788978 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170682825222 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190017387032 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.321732755597 0.056905535591 565% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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