These days with advances in technology more and more people are working from home. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.
In this ever-growing technological world where everything undergo sea of change over a period. Telecommuting, which means working from home with help of internet and telephones have become increasingly popular. This situation has both advantages and disadvantages which is discussed in below paragraphs.
The most important benefit is that it saves time and improves productivity. They don't need to waste time and money in commuting which help improving their lifestyle by exploring various hobbies. Moreover, one can have work life balance. It goes without saying that technology has given birth to ample of opportunities and access to the whole world from one corner. For instance, one of the largest private sector bank in India has given work from home facility for pregnant women.
But the disadvantages can not be overlooked as it is rightly said, " technology is a good servant but a bad master". One of the major drawback of tech savvy people is their sedentary lifestyle. This leads to various health problems in long run like obesity and blurred vision. It also reduces face to face communication and one forgets socializing. Additionally, one needs to have dedicated place at home as workstation. There is tremendous rise in e-waste due to overuse of technology and increasing dependency on same. Also, this working style is not possible where physical presence is required like fitness trainer or beautician.
All in all, I strongly believe that though human touch is necessary but continued development in technology outweighs the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38866396761 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07361317819 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655870445344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3127314804 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.1875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190767493274 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545618689259 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454247160394 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107930458692 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068213891451 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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