many people buy new phones or laptops to keep up with the latest technology. Is it a good or bad thing?
Nowadays, the majority of people purchase the latest gadgets like mobile phones and smart computers in order to cope up with technological advancement; however, it has both pros and cons. Indeed, according to my viewpoint, this phenomenon has brought enormous fruitful advantages to one-self; therefore, I consider this development as a good trend.
To begin with, proponents of new appliances cite a host of benefits. Firstly, Individuals can socialize themselves in better ways with the help of these developments because such devices allow them to connect with the world through the internet; therefore, they connect with more people worldwide and feel morally secured. Secondly, this saves plenty of time as we can carry out many of our routine tasks just on the fingertips like mobile banking, online shopping, and much more; as a result, we can perform all other activities efficiently.
On the contrary, there are many disadvantages to such a tendency. Principally, it has been scientifically proved that people who use such gadgets for a long time become less productive and more stubborn due to the addictive nature. Furthermore, these products are not only very expensive but require a handsome budget for proper maintenance; hence, it disturbs many families holistically.
To conclude, despite having many disadvantages, people prefer to purchase the latest technological products as soon as they are released into the market as they find this electronic device useful in various ways. Thus, I reiterate that we should definitely keep updating ourselves with the technical world because the advantages related to this clearly outweigh the disadvantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52713178295 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03188987739 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3337596883 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198559157176 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715041708902 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439979188592 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107883019039 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309926495258 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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