Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative development?
It is considered that the increasing number of people use most of their money for things and not put money in the bank. It might because of the value of money have changed day by day. In this essay, I will discuss about the view of this statement.
First of all, people spend money have their different purpose like entertainment, medication and education. It is brilliant to spend money for consuming products that make people feel delight as it might be one of the way to release stress for some people. However, people should understand the importance of money saving while purchasing things, such as resulting an unsecure life in the future. For example, there was a news which reported about a fourty years old man got a serious cancer and he had no money for medical treatment as he used to spend what he earned from work. This case teaches us that we need to save money for make our life secured.
Secondly, it is actually great to spend as much money to cycling the economy system for governments. However, the people might have a hard life because they always chase by money and need to work for money. It results that people can not fully enjoy their work and even life. Furthermore, people might become selfish in the future as they see money at the first sequence. In my opinion, I think it will create more negative consequences if people continue spend their money.
In conclusion, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh its benefits, due to it causes the unsecure life and makes people’s value incorrect.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7276119403 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49832590417 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2232317562 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275722021202 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102491812341 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346478246125 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161320510778 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517965849408 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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