In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
It is common to live in an apartment these days in cities. Some people think it has more benefits while others think opposite. In this essay, I will discuss about both views and give a logical conclusion.
First of all, people who live in an apartment consider it is well-organized and convenient. Generally, there is security system and parking space underground within apartments. It secures the safety and belongings of residents and provides convenience for people who struggle to find the space for parking. Moreover, it might offer additional recreation facilities which gives residents a comfortable zone for exercising and save people’s money to work out in the gym. Furthermore, the city view from high level could be an advantage for some people as they enjoy it more than natural greens.
On the other hand, living in an apartment could have a poor living quality as there are lots of people live in a same building and the noise from traffic in the city area. Therefore, people may suffer from a pressure and nervous mood and it could caused the long-term health problem. What is more, apartments might designed as a small space because the major purpose of building an apartment is saving space in the city area. In this case, it will be the disadvantage for someone who have a big family. In addition, the cold neighborhood will be involved due to the rarely chances to meet neighbors.
In conclusion, there are both several advantages and disadvantages to live in an apartment. However, I believe the benefits outweigh its drawbacks as people have different living requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02996254682 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85469923938 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2021418318 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261871026339 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867282777639 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595832609551 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167363807191 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407562260886 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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