Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
There are lots of problems occur in the city area which people need to deal with them in their daily. This essay will discuss this issue and give a logical conclusion.
First of all, people who live in city areas may have environmental trouble such as the massive quantity of rubbish produced by large amount of people. It obvious can be seen at public areas, includes streets, bus stops, train stations and parks which pollutes the environment also leads a messy and dirty place. In addition, the main rubbish not only created by people at publics but also households like their daily cooking.
Secondly, another aspects of problem is traffic difficulty which make people hard to access city areas. Especially during the peak time which is the period of people go to work or finish work, there are full of people, cars, buses and trains that are hurry to go to their destinations. It is not only a transportation issue but also apparently impact the air pollution, because of the huge number of vehicles.
Finally, the crowd of people cause low living quality and a presure lifestyle. The limit of land for people who want to live in the city and the expensive rent for accommodations make most of the people choose to stay in an apartment and sharing their home space with others, this means people cannot feel relax and enjoy their leisure time at home and lead an uncomfortable condition.
In conclusion, there are certainly a variety of problems that living in the city which involve the environment, transportation and personal living. I believe it can be improved if government try to manage the city population properly which encourage people to live in other towns.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60924200497 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9932287846 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269805707606 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993732114072 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651126727992 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150112685413 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326668043752 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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