Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
What people work for? We need to answer this question to find out why people spent their all money. I think there are many reasons for this phenomenon. But I will explain cultural and personal reasons in this essay. At the end, I will discuss that if this is a positive or negative development.
Live in the moment! This is a famous sentence that many people in many cultures follow. In many countries, people just live in the present. For instance, in the USA there are many people working and earn money but they don’t work until their money finish. In my Country-Iran- we have a famous poet named Hafez having a famous poetry with this meaning and many people try to live in the moment and don’t care about the future while this can make a harder life for them in the future.
Some people don’t like to have a stress full life so they don’t care about the future. In some developed countries, although people know that they will have a hard future, they don’t care about that. So they never save any money. But the governments in the mentioned countries try to make some facilities for these people. For instance, In Australia, there is a department named Centrelink that helps to people who could not make a good life for themselves or their children and tries to enhance their life quality.
In the conclusion, I believe that in developed countries people know that their government will support them in the future thus they don’t need to save money. On the other hand, the countries’ economy will be enhanced by the people spending their money. At the end, I think that this is a positive development for today’s people who need more feeling comfortable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...ositive or negative development. Live in the moment! This is a famous sentence that many pe...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...his meaning and many people try to live in the moment and don't care about the future wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76351351351 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58337064151 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462837837838 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7826588638 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9411764706 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310285356458 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122964091618 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583163496234 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213732668138 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893034755649 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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