Around the world, solar energy is becoming a more popular source of energy for many households. Why do you think this is so? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using solar energy to power one’s home?

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Around the world, solar energy is becoming a more popular source of energy for many households. Why do you think this is so? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using solar energy to power one’s home?

Nowadays, using solar has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world which leads to a moot question what are the positive and negative consequences? It is a widely held view that renewable energies are highly beneficial, while I tend to believe that one must weigh up the pros and cons of it.
From a social point of view, using solar energy is indeed bound to reducing the family''s costs, which it might lead to both enhance the family''s lifestyle and financial condition. For instance, a group of profound scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between using solar energy and families lifestyle as well as the next generation. This evidence presented thus far supports the contention that switching to use renewable energy is positively correlated with not only improving living but also improving children''s future life.
Moreover, in political terms, solar energy is undoubtedly attributable to save the Earth, in that it would lead to keep the planet clean, green and save the animal''s habits. A well-known example of such attribution is burning fuels, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken in taking environments preservation for granted. Thus, using solar energy could play a significant role in keeping the earth for the next generations.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that using renewable energies such as solar energy has just advantages and the governments and individuals must try to develop using of solar energy more than before among the public.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'environments'' or 'environment's'?
Suggestion: environments'; environment's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2371541502 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89914414814 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5684004576 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.222222222 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352227035371 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141949330175 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781210459277 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220090046703 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062434505389 0.0609392437508 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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