In this contemporary world of modernization, movies and television shows are considered to be the best source of recreation among all age groups. A plethora of people opine that these two have negatively affected the mindset of many while others state that this form of media is beneficial and powerful. This essay will discuss how this entertaining media is prominent for despite its harmful effects.
The major reason as to why certain people believe that this means of refreshment is negatively affecting the folks is the content which is being telecasted on TV shows and pictures. Nowadays, incidents like accidents, stunts, romance, murders, crime, et cetera, are very common in these broadcasting series; due to which youngsters get highly influenced and do not hesitate to perform such dangerous activities in their real life without knowing the fact that all aforementioned actions are being performed under supervision only. Thus, movies and television programs do destroy the future of young people by destroying their mindset.
However, another bunch of people consider this mass media to be advantageous and prestigious because it is one of the major sources of information. For instance, there are numerous films and TV shows based upon real life stories of popular artists or writers that can influence the mind of people to a greater extent by providing them strong information along with evidences. Moreover, there is plethora of history-related TV series that gives vast information about a particular incident. Also, there are several news channels which provide time to time information about current affairs and events on daily basis. Thus, media plays a vital role in disclosing the useful information to its viewers.
In conclusion, different people have different perception regarding entertaining media as some consider it to be useful while others consider it to be deteriorating the society. However, in my opinion, media plays a crucial role in enhancing the knowledge of general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36593059937 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92375760398 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599369085174 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5780339873 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197701506503 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674938482139 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526533530265 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114056840918 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352256583551 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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