It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in all public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Smoking is defined as the process of inhalation of tobacco fumes by an individual. Although, some countries have marked it illegal to smoke in public areas, there are certain places where this action can be taken out. This essay will discuss as to why every nation should opt this idea of banning the smokers to smoke in public areas.
The primary reason why smoking should be controlled in public regions is the harmful effects of the exhaled fumes on the smoker as well as the people surrounding him or her. Since there might be number of individuals in the public areas who might be suffering from breathing as well as respiration problems, this smoke can lead them towards critical condition . For instance, a research suggested that the smoke that comes out after burning the tobacco is 50 percent more dangerous for passive smokers as compared to those active smokers. That is why; smoking should be banned in public areas in order to protect the public health.
In addition, the second reason why this law needs to be implemented is that this practice may influence the young generation to get indulge in this deleterious activity; ruining their health as well as future. For example, a survey was conducted among young smokers who confirmed that they have fallen in this bad habit by observing the smokers around them in parks, gardens, malls, et cetera. Thus, this needs to be banned in public areas in order to preserve the future of the nation.
In conclusion, this essay argued why smoking should not be allowed in public areas. In my opinion, until efforts are made, this issue is going to escalate.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...can lead them towards critical condition . For instance, a research suggested tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83032490975 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41689145776 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6424763793 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235888381321 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102516366205 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669227001944 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165926713316 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757313664049 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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