Television is considered to be the best source of recreation, especially among children. Some people opine that content which children watch, effects their behavior while others believe that their nature is impacted by the time spent on watching it. This essay will discuss how the behavior of a child is influenced by the content.
A plethora of folks states that the content broadcasting over TV is responsible for the change in nature of children. The TV sometimes come up with unhealthy advertisements or shows. For example, advertisement showing an arrogant child misbehaving with his or her parents can influence the behavior of watcher to a greater extent; shifting his or her noble behavior to swagger one. Thus, the telecast of such detrimental content is can influence their behavior.
However, another bunch of people consider the time spent on watching television to be the reason behind changing behavior of their wards. According to them, more the time spent glued to the screen, less the time spent with family members. For instance, the day of a child commence with a hectic schedule nowadays as their most of the day time is utilized in studying. And after reaching home, if they will be stuck to TV, they will not be able to spend their free time with their beloved ones. As a result, they will lack the family ethics. That is why; time management plays a vital role in case of children.
In conclusion, this essay argued the influation of TV content on children's mind. In my opinion, parents should keep a regular check on their wards about both these aforementioned aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9405204461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68840325428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7244395986 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379757744872 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113697950475 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917899727719 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218324541764 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10455100012 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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