In this contemporary world of gadgets, most of the children spend their time by playing games on computers and mobile phones rather than participating in any outdoor activities. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and provide evidence as to how it is a negative development.
The major reason why wards tend to waste their time by sticking to the screen of computers and mobile phones is the advancement in technology. Such gadgets provide a plethora of games that can be played while sitting. Moreover, internet has added fuel to the fire by providing an option of online gaming websites and online games that can be played across the world. For instance, children used to go outside in order to play football, volleyball, tennis, et cetera, but nowadays, all these games are available on internet and students play them online rather than going to playgrounds. Thus, the evolution in the history of technology is the major cause in declining the interest of children towards sports.
However, this growth is putting its negative impacts on growth of children by deteriorating their health to a greater extent; making them obese. Few decades ago, children consider playing in the grounds to be the best source of recreation, but at present, cell phones and computers has replaced it. The sports played in the ground involved their full body movement making their digestion and immune system strong, whereas they are now dealing with the health problems like obesity and weak immunization because of less exercise. Thus, this deterioration of health of children is the prominent disadvantage of this evolution.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason behind the shifting of children interest from playgrounds to computers and mobile phones. In my opinion, technology is heading towards destroying the health as well as future of youngsters as well as nation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16286644951 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75710146805 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.371001583 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264575628094 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891233957248 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566564000275 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154913740448 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786720437998 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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