Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Any drug for humans is marketed after doing it's plethora of experiments on vermins. Many people hold up this notion whereas some argue that it is not the proper way. Although, animal testing is useful for humans, I believe that it should not be done and this essay will discuss both the arguments.
To commence with, there are ample of incurable diseases for which invention of new drugs is mandatory and for that animal testing is the safest way. Additionally, not only the safety of drugs can proven but it can also improve the human health. Moreover, animals are easily available for testing as no human will opt for it. Furthermore, animal experiments will curb its population, if number of animals incessantly augments. For example, experiments on rodents will eventually control its population because later it will create perilous eventualities for humans in the form of ailments. Though, I believe that exploitation of creatures for human benefits should not be done.
On the contrary, there are several reasons to support that animal testing is inappropriate. Firstly, the pivotal reason is that they are the part of nature as they also have an equal right of living peacefully. Secondly, ecosystem will be interrupted because animals play a cardinal role in ecosystem. To illustrate, if testing is done in numerous omnivorous creatures then, the number if herbivorous animals will be increased. Thirdly, every medicine will not affect animals as same as humans due to disparity in immune system. Finally, animals rights will be humiliated. Hence, I believe that animal testing is not acceptable.
In conclusion, agglomerating all the above mentioned points, I believe that experiments on vermins will snatch their right of living. So, it should not be happened and it is recommended that researchers should find other ways to test medicines.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85014424586 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7523212083 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313245023033 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108398268118 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878205259492 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186003166372 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928985923297 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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