Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle, others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, the importance of maintaining healthy lifestyle is increasing across the globe. There is an argument that this should be a government’s responsibility, while others feel that it should self conscious. This essay will examine explain both the views and provides the opinion in the lateral paragraph.
Some people say that governments should pay attention to provide a healthy lifestyle to their citizens because they consider it can be taken care only through food intake. For example, to limit the obesity caused due to the consumption of fast food, the western countries have brought norms on the manufacturers and restricted the production. Although this move from the nations affected the economy very badly, people started losing weights and turning out fit. Therefore, as far as junk food consumption is concerned, governments play a major role to help their people to lead healthy life.
However, I believe that it should individual concern to be health conscious. This is because everyone has the equal facilities to work out and in-built ability to control themselves from craving. For instance, there is evidence for this which came across the newspaper recently, this is a real-life story of an obese employee working from 9 AM to 6 PM, who managed to go gym regularly and restricted his diet is now extremely slim and fit. To add further, this practice will even have more benefits such as an active mind, and a clear though process.
To conclude, there is a belief in the society that governments can assist their individuals in maintaining healthy lifestyle since they have power to control the food production, but I feel that it is a good habit to have that responsibility with the people because apart from they being healthy, it also have several other advantages like being active and having good thoughts.
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... being active and having good thoughts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09900990099 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79138862794 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6236110991 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204143021403 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739399834774 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532797579291 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125109159411 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453464380662 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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