Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
These days, the consumption of fast food is growing at an alarming rate. There is an argument that people are eating fast food knowing the repercussions associated with it. I too agree with this argument because it has got lot many varieties to attract food lovers and it can be solved by taking some special measures.
First and foremost cause for increase in consuming fast food is that it has got lot many dishes for foodies to taste. This is because many restaurants had explored this cuisine to satisfy their customer’s taste buds. As in the process of exploration, many styles of cooking have been introduced in recent past. For instance, a local junk food restaurant in my city had found a new dish for their customers which suddenly grabbed an attention from all over the public in the city. Therefore, many people are going with the taste irrespective of the precautions from the health experts.
I can suggest two possible solutions to this problem. Firstly, the government should conduct more health awareness programs. For instance, they can go with some physically fit celebrity discussing the health hazards by consuming fast food. This would lead to a greater awareness campaign among the public. Secondly, restaurants should be made responsible in order to guide their customers with healthy food habits. In other words, these eateries should eventually stop treating their customers with junk food instead they should start serving them the healthy diet.
To conclude, the attractive number of varieties in fast food is the primary cause for having a high intake without considering the negative results stated by doctors. However, this problem can be dealt by enlightening people with the help of celebrities and making restaurants responsible while serving their customers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponsible while serving their customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6970319198 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3606419625 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300712006906 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954043843033 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565349895558 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182290430984 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339455469109 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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