Many people think the professional sportsmen/sportswomen's behaviors on or off the field are not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
In the contemporary society, a sportsperson is an extremely influential being. As they rise to their fame and glory everyone looks up to them as a role model or a celebrity. Although an ordinary persons’ behavior is not a concern to a majority of the people, it becomes one when they become a big name.
To begin with, a professional sports player is considered to be a celebrity and therefore their behavior in personal life is also exposed to the public. The sports men and women are always followed by the paparazzi and they do not have any privacy. They represent our country, culture and norms before the entire world. The ordinary people follow and listen to them and some even try to mimic their everyday lifestyle. Consequently, the general public also follows the manner in which they conduct themselves and how they behave with people around them as normal beings.
Moreover, an athlete’s behavior on the field is also a significant aspect. If a person displays unacceptable behavior, their team members will be reluctant to approach or work with them which may ultimately lead to forfeiting the game. If any player demonstrates poor behavior, it impacts the entire team as a whole because there will be conflicts with that particular member. Hence, the strategies would be loosely formulated around that person as no one desires to interact with him or her. This might eventually lead to a disappointing performance on the field despite being an outstanding player. Furthermore, unacceptable behavior on the field it could affect the safety of other members leading to severe injuries and fatalities.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that the professional sportsmen and sportswomen are rendered as celebrities to the society. Hence, their behavior on or off the field is closely followed by a number of followers irrespective of how they play. Additionally, it has an impact on the team spirit and how the game is played.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03395061728 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94233269253 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3117836497 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210123528006 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647696741535 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391000600381 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121916199521 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402973039958 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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