Many people think the professional sportsmen/sportswomen's behaviors on or off the field are not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
A sportsperson is an extremely influential being in the contemporary society. As they rise to their fame and glory everyone looks up to them as a role model or a celebrity. Hence, it is imperative that along with being a good player, they also have a positive behavior. In the following paragraphs I will put forth the reasons for my opinion.
To begin with, a professional athlete is a role model and youth icons. People, especially youth, look up to them and follow them and if they behave perfectly, people will follow them and learn good qualities and try to incorporate in their lives. On the contrary, if they are rude and indulge in immoral activities, youth may also do the same thing. For instance, many a times we have seen that youth start smoking after getting influenced from their idols.
Additionally, a positive behavior also has several benefits for the players themselves. Those who demonstrate inappropriate behavior like being rude or using inappropriate languages may be not be respected and may even suffer severe consequences for their actions. For example, Sakib-al-Hasan, a Bangladeshi cricket player, got banned several times for being disrespectful towards the umpire and fellow team members, despite being an all rounder and earning several trophies for the team. But good etiquette not only bring respect, it also aids in improved performance on the field as communication among team members becomes much friendlier and they try to help each other. Consequently, these factors contribute to getting promotions and better remunerations. For instance, Mashrafe bin Mortaza is adored by all not only within the country, but by many across the border, for his friendly temperament. Hence, he gradually became the best captain for Bangladeshi cricket team and also nominated as the MP of his home district.
To sum up, I firmly believe that a professional sports player is loved by the public not only for their good playing skills but also for their good code of conduct which not only sets a good example for the youth but also benefits them in their career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05780346821 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87901313463 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563583815029 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8747152612 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129262483962 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048126135506 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483117465464 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909828974741 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211213417314 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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