Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
People often consider that a person can be described based on the clothes they wear. In my opinion, there are other factors that contribute to a particular persons’ nature and their perception of culture. The essay will discuss my views for the disagreement.
To begin with, times have changed and a major proportion of the people’s style of clothing has changed to match their needs. Most people wear clothes according to their level of comfort. Some people wear uniforms depending on the type of job they are in. This is related to their office culture. Furthermore, it would be difficult and biased to judge a person by their clothes. For example, a thief wearing a suit and pant may appear to be a gentleman which is in contrast to his nature. In order to know ones’ character more information is very much important.
However, in some cases it can be assumed about a persons’ character when comparing between two people. For example, a woman wearing a scarf is considered to be more religious than someone who is not wearing one. Even though both could be equally religious, the difference is their opinions on wearing scarves. It is simply their choices based on their opinions. It is also important to take into consideration their social culture that might influence their taste.
In conclusion, though assumptions can be made about a person based on their preference of clothes but it requires a more in depth knowledge about the persons’ life to actually determine their character or their culture.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03515625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85926560156 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.182221892 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255329815973 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878918775309 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606045254326 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172271899909 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384258217642 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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