You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there For some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your fetter
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Samuel,
I greatly appreciate your excitement on my arrival to New Zealand and my flight is on 4th February 2019. I am writing to you requesting for your assistance regarding a part time job.
My classes will commence from the last week of September and I have enlisted the subjects I will be taking each semester, which will also allow me to take up a job. I have been informed that there will be test every other month and the finals take place after every four months.
As you are already aware of my financial condition, I would like to take up a part time job as soon as I join you. This would relieve some of the burden off my family and I would be able at peace knowing that I can fend for myself.
It would be really helpful if you could suggest me some part time jobs in your area or perhaps at your workplace.
Thank you in advance for your help and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your friend
Annie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...uesting for your assistance regarding a part time job. My classes will commence from the...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...al condition, I would like to take up a part time job as soon as I join you. This would r...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... soon as I join you. This would relieve some of the burden off my family and I would be abl...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ly helpful if you could suggest me some part time jobs in your area or perhaps at your wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25280898876 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21368988939 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8417758568 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329780469521 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163511945518 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12074961146 0.0603063233224 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20565421494 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104621320742 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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