Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?
It is believed that there are number of people who incessantly make an effort to look like adolescents, despite of having old age. There are several reasons behind this trend and although, it is a good thing, there are few demerits. This essay will narrate both the statements.
To commence with, younger age will make a huge positive impact on personal relationships. In other words, of people look young then, their private bonding with other humans will not only be augmented but also made stronger as well as well maintained. For example, people especially females always admire young people compare to older ones. Additionally, people have a psychology that they can not accept the old look because people have a fear of isolation from society. Hence for this reason they try to look young. Moreover, plethora of professions demand young people rather than old due to better capability. Therefore, sometimes for a better sustainbility at job, people try to look young than their actual age. So, these are the cardinal causes why people do not want to show their real age.
Furthermore, it is beneficial for people due to some reasons. Firstly, in order to look younger externally, they unconsciously make their overall life-style healthier. Secondly, they will gradually develop a positive thinking because of having perks of young life. Thirdly, people will live a physically healthy life that will keep them exempted from various diseases. However, efforts that will have to be given to look young is an arduous task as well as it is expensive. In addition to that, if people fail in their efforts, it will make them depressed, though, I believe that it is a good thing.
In conclusion, younger age will affect the overall health of individuals positively and undoubtedly, I believe that it will bring more benefits to human beings and it is recommended that people should try different ways to look adolescent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04388714734 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71186147639 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557993730408 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9860729671 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344203299168 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110558615883 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577411442531 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201764336056 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710540773193 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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