People nowadays try to look younger and thus rely on various artificial medications and treatments which create adverse effects in their health, sometimes proving to be fatal. The various reasons associated to why people try to maintain their youth and reduce their aging process will be discussed here.
It is of disappointment for many to accept the inevitable process of aging, and they resort to artificial medications to slow the aging process. People do not like to grow old and want to enjoy youth and look young, when they can be agile with more energy and enthusiasm to perform own tasks. There are people who like to travel around and maintain good physique or succeed fast in their professional career goals. With growing age, they loose energy and focus thereby hindering their ambitions to reach their goals.
Profession is another reason for people to look younger. Air-hostesses, actors and musicians have to look young and vibrant as it is necessary for their work. Such places have demand for people who look young and vibrant, and thus they resort to various ways to stop aging.
Thus people use artificial ways to look younger, like cosmetic surgeries, medical operations and even injecting themselves with steroid doses to maintain good physical structure.
However, immersing oneself into artificial hormonal treatments prove detrimental for one, causing diseases like cancer and heart failures, often being fatal.
In my opinion, it is not a good idea for anyone to try to look younger than their age which can be harmful, sometimes causing loss of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mful, sometimes causing loss of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18146718147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56144362145 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4467860937 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262955534217 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106779032921 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509753295146 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136441406811 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601889338869 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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