A recent study has revealed that a section of society endeavours to look younger than their age. In this essay , i will mention the reasons behind youthful look irrespective of their ages and will also give my views on how it has both positive and negative aspects .
Firstly , to survive with the profession in this competitive edge people tends to look more glamorous . Some profession gives importance to physical appearance .Especially in Film Industry , the actors refrain themselves from revealing their ages and apt to look glamorous.Consequently they undergo cosmetic surgeries and other various surgeries in order to look fit and young. For example , an article has revealed that the legendary actress, Sri devi had undergone different surgeries to look beautiful and young . Furthermore , Air hostesses have to be in full make up when they are on duty .
Secondly , the phobia of isolation from society has impacted certain people to look younger . It is commonly seen in some workplaces that female employees form age groups and people isolate the one who is older in age. This is another instance why females hesitate in revealing their ages and tends to look young . For instance, in certain firms especially in Bpo s where their are no age limitations . People of all aged groups are hired . It has been seen that female age groupism takes place in firms
There are certain instances , where this approach has both positive and negative effects. Positive impacts like celebrities or other professionals get more opportunities to grow in their respective field. They get better job offers .
This has some negative effects like it has adverse effects on individuals health . Sometimes it gives rises to cancer and lead to death . Other health issues like ruptures of veins can occur .
To conclude, youthful look has both negative and positive aspects . For the daily bread , one is bound to look glamorous . however it has negative impacts like cancer and skin tissue rupture may occur . Still, I believe that one should prevent themselves from undergoing excessive surgeries in order look beautiful and young .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80983399328 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3523775522 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212966337282 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663286320658 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579557143654 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105993069282 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068253409572 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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